damn nice a lot of missed spelled words but i can guess most of them by the way is there more romance options
you what would be cool if the mc grew black wings when he/she/them flips their shit for kidnapping the princess bc i thought white wings heaven black wings fallen angel of healing
but keep up the great work this is a wonderful game and this would make a series of powered humans ^^
The MC seems waaay to happy to lose everything they've ever known and just go into being an instructor. I'd prefer it if they're a little more conflicted/hesitant, or at least have the option.
Ok so I cant say much as you will find out a lot with the update comes so Ill say this.
Mc is very very pissed and broken. (Its not obvious as they are hiding it from themselves and you. Mc is also hiding things from you as well simple because they don't think it since its not relevant yet.)
Mc has nothing to fall on. They are still considered a threat if everyone finds out they are alive. (There were over 20 dead. Mc has more people that hate them then you think.)
Mc friends and allies were all dead. (Besides Lisa and few others that survived.)
Mc considered the factors of course but Mc knew there was one way and that was with Noah and being an instructor.
Mc is trying to pick up the pieces but try to remember they are broken and it hurts a lot.
That's why Mc jumps at the chance to go to Lisa. Noah did not tell Mc where she was and Mc was trying to put together a semi life as an instructor.
I'm sorry i didn't see this when you first posted this as it was my Mom's birthday and I wanted to take a break from the screen.
I don't mind your opinions and If you want clarifications I can try but with the Mc . I have to be careful as there is a lot going on and the Mc is very much a spoiler themselves .
Now there is an option now. I did add it last week but some things have popped up and slowed the update down.
This could be better it was too fast pace I would like it to slow down some. Like teaching class I want to get to know everyone instead of jumping around. and I would like to actually teach the class. I'm sorry if this is harsh in anyway I'm not trying to be rude.
No no, it's ok. It's just my train of thought was a certain way. As of right now, it will feel rushed but I'm working on different things. I've had something personal slow up my writing. As of now and when you will teach will be after what I'm writing. The classroom scene will be expanded on but the main reason why you don't get to teach right now is because of a problem and only You. I originally had it were you taught a whole day but that would mean Lisa would have been far more rough with your Mc. And I didn't like that scene. But I'm working on the classroom scene to make it better.
And in the next update when I can finish the paths I'm working on you will get to know your three students. I don't mind commentary yes it's harsh but if you don't hurt me as a writer I would think I was doing something wrong. But as of now, the classroom scene is planned out but not written. I know what you will be teaching in that class as it's a new semester But I did a time skip because You are a well-known instructor. And the students have a running joke about you being powerless. Of course, these are the ones who haven't had your class.
You as an instructor Teach combat and what the students cant do when out in the field. And you cover a certain special class. This will be a choice later as Jenny, Lena, and Scott will be in it. I'm still working on this but if you have an Idea I can add it to the pile.
And I rather you tell me this then just read it and hate it. But teaching will be apart of it. But there are Moments where time speeds up because of plot. I have certain things that are the main focus right now its for you to get a feel with your team. And some characters get introduced.
But after all the things you will go back to teaching.
If you have questions or more thoughts I don't mind you sharing them. But I do feel I failed with the classroom scenes and the defect options. I'm working on both but I'm also working on the next part as well. I cant give an estimate on the next update as my brain has stone walled me. So I took a few days off. But I'm working on it now.
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wish i could romance other characters that would be dope and there are some missed spelled words in there
hmm well you also got
Atlas a young woman who has reason to be around the Mc.
Attina our mermaid/siren princess. Girl might be a tiny bit obsessed.
Psyche a Villain that works with Alice here and there.
Rune
Rene
Lady jade
and a secret Red flag romance option. (psst you've met her already.)
Oh and a poly/harem with Jade, Rune, and Rene.
I did come up with quite a few.
Oh and this has all the ROs if you want the visual. And with me now back writing i should have the misspelled words fixed.
nice never knew the romance list was even made ^^
damn nice a lot of missed spelled words but i can guess most of them by the way is there more romance options
you what would be cool if the mc grew black wings when he/she/them flips their shit for kidnapping the princess bc i thought white wings heaven black wings fallen angel of healing
but keep up the great work this is a wonderful game and this would make a series of powered humans ^^
Yeah sorry about that. I working on the corrections and the next chapter. I moved and sorta had no internet for a month.
And yep there are more romance options. You can go to my blog on tumblr. Winters Story (tumblr.com)
And that is an great idea for the future. Just gonna note that down. But I will say the Mc powers will come at a steep price.
that's okay I just really enjoyed the storyline ^^
The MC seems waaay to happy to lose everything they've ever known and just go into being an instructor. I'd prefer it if they're a little more conflicted/hesitant, or at least have the option.
Ok so I cant say much as you will find out a lot with the update comes so Ill say this.
Mc is very very pissed and broken. (Its not obvious as they are hiding it from themselves and you. Mc is also hiding things from you as well simple because they don't think it since its not relevant yet.)
Mc has nothing to fall on. They are still considered a threat if everyone finds out they are alive. (There were over 20 dead. Mc has more people that hate them then you think.)
Mc friends and allies were all dead. (Besides Lisa and few others that survived.)
Mc considered the factors of course but Mc knew there was one way and that was with Noah and being an instructor.
Mc is trying to pick up the pieces but try to remember they are broken and it hurts a lot.
That's why Mc jumps at the chance to go to Lisa. Noah did not tell Mc where she was and Mc was trying to put together a semi life as an instructor.
I'm sorry i didn't see this when you first posted this as it was my Mom's birthday and I wanted to take a break from the screen.
I don't mind your opinions and If you want clarifications I can try but with the Mc . I have to be careful as there is a lot going on and the Mc is very much a spoiler themselves .
Now there is an option now. I did add it last week but some things have popped up and slowed the update down.
This could be better it was too fast pace I would like it to slow down some. Like teaching class I want to get to know everyone instead of jumping around. and I would like to actually teach the class. I'm sorry if this is harsh in anyway I'm not trying to be rude.
No no, it's ok. It's just my train of thought was a certain way. As of right now, it will feel rushed but I'm working on different things. I've had something personal slow up my writing. As of now and when you will teach will be after what I'm writing. The classroom scene will be expanded on but the main reason why you don't get to teach right now is because of a problem and only You. I originally had it were you taught a whole day but that would mean Lisa would have been far more rough with your Mc. And I didn't like that scene. But I'm working on the classroom scene to make it better.
And in the next update when I can finish the paths I'm working on you will get to know your three students. I don't mind commentary yes it's harsh but if you don't hurt me as a writer I would think I was doing something wrong. But as of now, the classroom scene is planned out but not written. I know what you will be teaching in that class as it's a new semester But I did a time skip because You are a well-known instructor. And the students have a running joke about you being powerless. Of course, these are the ones who haven't had your class.
You as an instructor Teach combat and what the students cant do when out in the field. And you cover a certain special class. This will be a choice later as Jenny, Lena, and Scott will be in it. I'm still working on this but if you have an Idea I can add it to the pile.
And I rather you tell me this then just read it and hate it. But teaching will be apart of it. But there are Moments where time speeds up because of plot. I have certain things that are the main focus right now its for you to get a feel with your team. And some characters get introduced.
But after all the things you will go back to teaching.
If you have questions or more thoughts I don't mind you sharing them. But I do feel I failed with the classroom scenes and the defect options. I'm working on both but I'm also working on the next part as well. I cant give an estimate on the next update as my brain has stone walled me. So I took a few days off. But I'm working on it now.
this was amazing 100/10!!
Thank You!!!!
I'm working on some code and other corrections for the next update.